1. One day, fifteen years old boy drived on the road, and had an accident that hit a little girl. His grandfather tried to be blamed instead him, but he was being feel guilty and the responsibility. 밑에서 짤린교수님께서 조언을 해주셨는데.. 그래도 어떻게 해야할지 잘 모르겠네요 an accident that hit a little girl.이 사고가 작은 소녀를 치었다... 라는 뜻인가요? 그럼.. 작은 소녀를 친 사고를 만들었다를 쓰려면 어떻게 해야하죠? 2. every action you have taken carries certain but unavoidable responsibilites with it. avoid personal pronouns 라고 하는데 we를 넣으면 되는지.. 그런데 we도 personal 아닌가요? 아니면 one을 써도 되는건지요..? 3. His grandfather tried to be blamed instead him, but he was being feel guilty and the responsibility. 여기서..he was being feel guilty and the responsibility. 이 부분이 어색한가요? guilty는 형용사, responsibility는 명사? 저는 그냥 ' 그는 죄책감과 책임감을 느끼고 잇엇다' 를 쓰고 싶은데 어떻게 해야할까요? 4. But his grandfather couldn't let Webb blame and he persuade that he would be blamed instead Webb. 여기서 couldn't에 동그라미를 치고 no contraction이라고 써놨네요 짤린교수님이 동사 목적어 까지 다 쓰라는것 같다고 하셨는데.. 잘 모르겠어요.. 어떻게 해야할까요..; 5. what you've done carries certain responsibilities. 여기서도 you've를 동그라미 쳐놨네요.. 어떻게 하면 좋을지;;; 쓰고 보니 숙제해달라는거 같은데..;; 잘 몰라서 그런거니 좀 도와주세요..