문법 사항하고 단어 사용에 부적절한 부분만 수정 부탁 내용 대폭 수정하기에는 시간이.. 수정해준 고수님들 다들 감사요ㅋ Homosexuality should not be permitted in Korea society      Homosexuality is the love between people who have the same sex. It has existed for a long time. We don't know when it entered into our society, but this has been one of the most controversial issues in Korea. Social agreement for this matter has not been established, but my opinion is that we are not ready to accept it. Throughout this essay, I argue why I am against homosexuality in Korea society.      To begin with, most Korea society has a negative opinion on homosexuality. Homosexuality is against the basic principles. Most people consider them as group of mental disease. People don't think of them as other people. Because of this negative point of view, homosexuals might not be able to have an ordinary life and their life may be miserable. They must understand that we should live together.      The other reason why I don’t accept homosexuality is that there are more chances to getting a venereal disease. AIDS has been occurred more with homosexuals   than common people. Because AIDS is an infectious disease, it is a serious problem to our society. The more homosexuality exists, the more AIDS patients will come into being. To decrease AIDS infection, we must prohibit homosexual love. Finally, there are harmful influences on children. Homosexual men cannot bear children in principle, so they must adopt children. The sons and daughters are taught by their parents, so they accept that homosexuality is normal. They are growing with confusing homosexuality with heterosexuality.      In conclusion, I think homosexuality should not be permitted in Korea society. There are several reasons for this. The main ideas are venereal disease and bad influence on their children. It is important to understand homosexuality’s opinion, but it is more important to prevent harmful influence on Korea society from abnormal love.